On the dead streets in the streetlight flicker reality was not on my mind and then in the forest a fox shining like the stars out there in space where my brain is floating but my eyes are right here
TONIGHT is a solid piece of writing. Especially, the "reality was not on my mind" part. I like that shit a ton. It's such a simple blunt thrust toward a definition of altered states.
Sure, not giving shits has benefits. Like during the main writing. But the trick, I think, is always producing a tight final edit. That way, it's loose but not sloppy like some gangfucked hole.
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TONIGHT is a solid piece of writing. Especially, the "reality was not on my mind" part. I like that shit a ton. It's such a simple blunt thrust toward a definition of altered states.
Sure, not giving shits has benefits. Like during the main writing. But the trick, I think, is always producing a tight final edit. That way, it's loose but not sloppy like some gangfucked hole.
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